Socha nahi acha Bura, Dekha Suna kuch b nahi
Manga Khuda se raat-din, Tere siwa Kuch b nahi
**********
Dekha Tujhe Chaha tujhe, Socha Tujhe Pooja Tujhe
Meri Wafa Meri Khata, Teri Khata kuch b nahi
**********
Jis per Hamari Aankh ne, Moti bichaye Raat bhar
Bheja wohi Kagaz usey, Hum ne likha Kuch b nahi
**********
Aur Ek Shaam ki Dehleez per, Bethey rahe wo Dair tak
Aankhon se ki Batain boht, Munh se kaha kuch b nahi
**********
Do-Chaar din ki Baat hai, Dil Khaak mai mil jaye ga
Aag per jab Kagaz rakha, Baqi bacha Kuch b nahi
5 comments:
it was my first read here and i must say i liked the poem a lot.
the only thing i feel that needs an improvement is the spellings of certain Urdu words and the use of 'b' instead of 'bhi' was a tad irritating.
it would be nice to see if the blog layout could be modified to a certain extent to make it a wee bit easier on the eyes.
i guess i'll be back for some more... :)
Poem is really touching with deep meaning. I remember one punjabi line;
mere hanju jad gayahi dende meri peed di,tun hoka bann jind vich samaa jaanda;Ena julm na kar meri sehkadi jind te kuj gunaah taan Khudaa vi bhoolah denda.
jab mere ansoon mere dard ki gavahi dete haen tum tab sehem kar saans mea samaa jaate ho; itna julam na kar meri tadapti jindgani par kuch gunaah toh khuda bhi bhula deta hae
[url=http://firgonbares.net/][img]http://firgonbares.net/img-add/euro2.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]compare educational software, [url=http://firgonbares.net/]Software PC[/url]
[url=http://firgonbares.net/][/url] cheap software directory i lost my microsoft office 2003 product key
stock price software [url=http://firgonbares.net/]best price adobe photoshop cs4 upgrade[/url] g1 software store
[url=http://firgonbares.net/]purchase of softwares[/url] quarkxpress 6.0, torrent
[url=http://firgonbares.net/]cheap software canada[/url] microsoft virtual software
filemaker pro 4, driver [url=http://firgonbares.net/]media composer software academic[/b]
[url=http://vonmertoes.net/][img]http://vonmertoes.net/img-add/euro2.jpg[/img][/url]
[b]adobe photoshop cs3 for mac student version, [url=http://hopresovees.net/]shop 2 software[/url]
[url=http://hopresovees.net/][/url] Content Bento 2 Mac educational software store
storefront software [url=http://hopresovees.net/]microsoft software for sale[/url] coreldraw eps problems
[url=http://vonmertoes.net/]Mac Poser 7[/url] microsoft system software
[url=http://bariossetos.net/]software at discount[/url] pc software stores in
nero 9 software cheap [url=http://hopresovees.net/]coreldraw x4 serial[/b]
Post a Comment